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Tuesday, 25 November 2008

hold on

right iv just fineshed my song about taylor swift brakin up with joe (bitch) lolz anway
thank you 2 mandy for helping me with my 2nd and 3rd verse
and 2 mrs joesph adam jonas and charlie+ellyjonas for suporting me and givin me the idea 2 wright a song about taylor swift and most of all thank you 2 mii bffl michaela she's the one who got me into the hole singer songwrightin thingie and i love you dudes 4 life and illr emember u wen i famouse


Hold on

What do u see in her
Everyone can see through her
Can you open your eyes
And see what she’s really like
She betreyed you
Like every one knew she would
Why waste your breath
She’s not worth it

Take a breath
It was you who said
Have faith restart
You don’t need to give up on
Love
Baby Please just hold on

How can you say you love her
When u no you rely don’t
You let you world rotate around her
But she didn’t have your best intrest in your heart

ohhh
Take a breath
It was you who said
Have faith restart
You don’t need 2 give up on
Love
Baby please hold on

Why don't you give another girl a try
Why don't you give someone else a chance
why can't you learn that the girl
you think you love doesn't love you back?

Chourse (x3)


Please baby hold on

thank you guyes so much i love u lot so much u guyes give me loads of inspration and dont foget 2 coment

love rachael..x

3 comments:

Mandy! said...

AWESOME! Thank YOU for using my lyrics! I'm also using your lyrics too. (hope you don't mind) I'm writing my own version too! I looked at your lyrics, and It gave me inspiration for my own! When It's finished I'll Send it too u!

Chaaarrlie said...

Hey!!! Luvin your song!!! I love the way you included bits from JB songs!!! Tanx for the tanx!! lol!!

Keep writing!!

Lv Charlie

Chaaarrlie said...

Hey!! Erm... i Know how you feel!! It annoys me that we have to wait so long for things to come out over here tho!!! Good luck writing your song can't wait to hear it!!! lol!!!

Lv Charlie