attenton 2 all song wrighters i need help

ok so im wrighting a song called ''all alone '' and iv got the first verse the bridge and the choruse but u noee im having a bit of spazzed out wrighters block so yh could u guyes help mee ples hears what i got 2 far

verse 1 / i feel invisable , all alown ,in the dark
rain is fallin , it hurts two much
but all i can do , id think of you
then i remeberd
bridge / your gone
you disaperded
out of sight
then i thought..
chourse/ am i losing it ,losing grip
am i in it , on my own
i need somone , to hold
are you their , is that you
no
i gess im all alown


yea and thats all i got please help mee im so stuck :'(

thankz

lv rach x

OH MY GOSH HE LOVES MEE

OK so i was talkin 2 my ex boyfriend dylan 2 day on msn
and this is how the convo went

rachael : hey dylan

dylan : hey rachael

rachael : u alryt i havnt seen u ina longtime

dylan : oh u noe the ussawll sleepin thinkin bout you

rachael wtf what did u just saii




ok thats all cn remaba but yea u saw ryt im not jsut losing it am i lol

any way in otha news

i wanna go 2 ipswich ( i donno hwy i just do lool )

soo hows every 1 cos NO ONE COMES ON HEAR ANYMORE ( NOT COOL ! )

im so bored im eating a dohnut :)
its tasty oh nd i gotta find u just came on
im listing 2 my i pod
sexxi :)

anywho im gonna goo now

bhyye

p.s comment :)

i think im goin crazy

ok major problem

is it me or is pete wentz hot

i just think theries somthin about him

hmmmm

anyway after reading mrs joesph adem jonas's blog i decided 2 go on to youtube and type in fall out boy they ar awsome i luv their song thanks for the memories its awsome

I AM FAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ITS NOT FAIR :'(

ANY WHO !!

valentins daii nd no valentine :'(

oh well lol

my fave bands nd ppl at the moe........

tokio hotel :)

fall out boy ( lol look at pete)

jonas brothers :) ( joes hair looks weird)

meto staton ( awsom band)

idena menzell ( bradway singer she's such good inspraton)

demi lovato ( hse has got such a powerfull voice another inspraton )

coment

aslso coment if u anyother good singers or bands i would luv it

lv rach x

bordomm

ok hi

im in school and borde outa my head nd tyerd and have a headach
(not cool!)
we're makin cd covers in ict 4 a band unit it's so cool

anywho i saw that realy fit teacher again :) happieness

woah iv just realised i havnt posed in a while

ok im not obsessed with the jo bros anymore

but i still listen 2 their music

nd metro staton rock lol

man im such an emo

any way comment byeeee x

lv rach x