attenton 2 all song wrighters i need help

ok so im wrighting a song called ''all alone '' and iv got the first verse the bridge and the choruse but u noee im having a bit of spazzed out wrighters block so yh could u guyes help mee ples hears what i got 2 far

verse 1 / i feel invisable , all alown ,in the dark
rain is fallin , it hurts two much
but all i can do , id think of you
then i remeberd
bridge / your gone
you disaperded
out of sight
then i thought..
chourse/ am i losing it ,losing grip
am i in it , on my own
i need somone , to hold
are you their , is that you
no
i gess im all alown


yea and thats all i got please help mee im so stuck :'(

thankz

lv rach x