im wrighin a song about tayor swift and joe joans
hears my frist verse
What do u see in her
Everyone can see through her
Can you open your eyes
And see what she’s really like
She betreyed you
Like every one knew she would
Why waste your breath
She’s not worth it
yea coment me withs ome idears if u hate taylor swift ( who dosent lol)
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4 comments:
it really good...but...i still think it should have been called die bitch die!
xD
YAYA!! it's really good!!! it's like a breath of fresh air 4 me coos all i can ever write r break up songs!!! but i'm working on a song bout a friendship that turns into a realationship, but they still go nowere. it's kinda happening to me.... nuuurg..
i thanx u sooooo much!! i'm glad u like it!! but ur an AWESOME lyricist as well, so u can write and i can write, then there can b 2 song writers who sing... or a name 4 that wuld b singer/songwriter.. (lol) we can all be famous!!!!
I'll add a second verse, chorus, and third verse if that's ok.
Verse 2:
how can you say that you love her when you know you really don't
I know you let your world rotate around her, but she didn't have your best interest in her heart.
Chorus:
How can you say she rules your world? how can you say she's your girl?
can't you see how blind you were loving her before.
How is it good for you or your lonely heart?
Verse 3
Why don't you give another girl a try
Why don't you give someone else a chance
why can't you learn that the girl you think you love
doesn't love you back?
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